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Yes, the original was sketched in red pencil, then I scanned and "attempted" to ink through photoshop (meaning, I was tracing the lines by hand with the paint brush) Guess it came out a bit sloppy. I guess Ill just trace the pic in RL with some extra paper and try again that way.
as fer yer "dwarf" the forshortening is a bit over exerted. Make the legs a lil longer^^ the rest is cool.
She's supposed to be in some sort of crouch, with the right leg near the camera, but the perspective's gone all shitish. I really should draw more often, last thing I did was the last thing I posted.
Actually her right leg (so on the left side of the picture) is quite fine, you see it from in front and it's bent. You can't guess the angles, it can very well be in proportion for the viewer. Her left leg is quite short, though. A quick fix would be to let her kneel on that and let the lower leg pass under her again.Quote:
Originally Posted by Dribble Joy
I like it Clive, good job.
DJ apart from the slight problem of proportion in the legs it looks good too.
Btw Clive I sent you a PM.
The left leg is set further down than the right, the foot is obscured by the base line, still looks a bit naff though.
Haw haw haw!
Yeah...
Well, the pose is misproportioned, but it can work.
You need to lengthen the left leg, especially the thigh. Then a tighter acute angle from the crouching should make it work.
The foreshortening on the right knee is all wrong. If the knee is pointing towards, and nearest to, the viewer, then the knee needs to 'seem' larger than the thigh and the right boot needs to be drawn sort of more tightly angled, like so: \ / from where it almost is now: | | . That way, the foreshortening should work MUCH better. By the way, the upper arms need to be a tad longer and thicker.
Big point in your favor, the pistols kick all ass.
Quick peice, my first done free hand in photoshop with no paper version :P
Dont ask why they're cats, they just are. :lol:
More serious peice at some point if i can be arsed to finish what i start :D
Freud would have a field trip on the "cat issue"
nice little thing though :)
I updated my sig. Saved as the original, so there isn't a comparision anymore, but it look rather better now, I think, what with the improved flame, illumination effect, and the blue glove, as befits a Psi Monk wearing spirit armor.
What do you think, guys? I updated this when I got my hands on the newest version of The Gimp.
I'm not too sure about the lighting and shading, though...
dirty monk =P
I've really got to start drawing again....
Come on, guys, I need critiques.
No boobies, you fail at life HP
Looks cool, kinda comic book like, lighting seems fine to me, but im far from an expert one the matter :pQuote:
Originally Posted by Heavyporker
here's my latest one, still needs some fine touches, eyes, hands and chest dont look quite right to me, will sort that out at some point :lol: Still only doing static poses too, not happy enough with the outcome of those to start doing sort of action shots :p