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Dead Bodies
22-12-05, 19:40
Once upon a time in the year 5075. A G.E.N Tank was born. A G.E.N tank

with great power, and importance. Wich was unknown to him or his elders.

He was born on December,24,5075. Upon him entering the world a Star was

born, it was the brightest star of the sky. He was born to a mother with no

father, and no father to father himself. The mother lost in hope, decides to

call him Twlight. In remberance of this bright star on the night of the birth.

That same evening, three enemy runners paid this baby a visit. The first was

an N.C.P.D runner who had followed this bright star in the sky to the baby.

Upon seeing this child his heart melts. He tells the mother that he is verry

special and to protect him. This runner then gives the baby a set of N.C.P.D

armor (copbot armor) for his protecton when he grows up. Later on that

evening a Twlight Guardian runner follows the same mesmorizing star to this

holy child. Upon arival he gets these tingly feelings inside his body. Being

Twlight Guardian, feelings are learned to be repressed. But a single tear drops

from the Twlight Guardians face. in all of his compassion he gives the baby a,

Special rifle wich he had ripped from the dead hands of his worst enemy, in

the war of neocron in 3057. Soon after the third runner follows the same

beautiful star to this holy baby, he is an Cran Sect Runner. Upon arival he

falls to his knees and utters, wierd but somehow holy words, he vows his life

to the holy baby. He gives him a special tool, a verry special tool that will

show its purpse later in his life. As time passes Twlight contunes to grow, but

he is not like the the other children. He has a specail glow to him and is full

of compassion. Never thought for himself, always fighting off the bully's that

pick on the spy's. As well as trying to tutor the tanks. One day while twlight

was at school. A band of Anarchy Breed, Storm the city, while the city burns

the Anarchists turn to the children. Twlight Stands between the Anarchits

and the children. In almost God like words that spoke from the sky. "U shal

not harm these children, Be gone with ur ways. The band of Anarchists Laugh

at Twlight. They all point there guns at him and the children and FIRE!...

When all the dust settles, not a single child is hurt, and there are Anarchy

breed peices all over the place. Noone knew how this had happend, nor

question Twlight on his actions, It was unspoken of. As time passed The war

of the worlds contuned, Twlight was always for the cause of peace. So he

joins the Traders union at age 12. He contunes to be inpartial and allies of all

runners. During his long stay with the traders union, the times change and

even the traders union begins to sip at the cup of curruption. Twlight is

furious with the curruption of the world. He then decides, the only way to

make peace is to do it himself! So he wonders the wilderness for 3 years

untill he meets, a man named Albert Einstine. by this time twlight is 27 years

old and he begins to live with albet. Twlight was like a Son to albert who has

lost his son in the war of the worlds in 4736. Albert takes him under his wing,

and teaches him everything he knows. Way overseing the capacity of a

G.E.N tanks inteligence and skills. Albert knew this young man was special,

Verry special. They worked togeather for many years devising plans, and

items to help procreat their cause of peace and freedom! Albert begains to

train Twlight in the ways and uses of the three special items he receved as

a baby. He becomes profeciant with the use of his armor, and his historic

verry powerful rifle. But the tool has yet to show its true powers, but he still

carries it with him as he did since he was 5 years old. It somehow speaks to

him and gives him a sense of secutiry and power. Ten years pass albet is

getting verry old and unable to protect himself. Albet sends Twlight to the

Deadly posion swamps to find a K'tari Mushroom and to the desolate desert

to find Nightshade. Hopeing to make a potion to cure his aleness and to

prolong life. Twlight makes haste to the poson swamps. upon arival he runs

into a Group of, a long forgotten almost mithical creatures called regants. At

first they take to his armor as enemy. But as he closes in removes his

helmet, They All drop to the floor and begain to praise and chant him. Telling

him that he is their savior, that the Legacy spoke about ten thousand years

before. That he is to destory the curse that holds them in the swmps, the

same curse that makes them ugly. Twlight sympathetic to their casue,

says " i want to help u but i need k'tari mushroms or my father will die" . The

regants tell Twlight that only place to find the mushrooms is inside of the

fortress where the curse lies. Twlight decides he will get the mushrooms and

despose of this CURSE. Upon entering the fortress he is constantly

bombarded by various creatures and traps. Being the force that he is he fairs

them off with little or no effort. The deper into the cavern he goes, the more

wierd and ancient writing apears on the walls. somehow he can understand

them, he dosent know how but he can. They tell the story of the curse. And

it taks about a birth under the brightest star in the sky. Wierd'd out by the

ancient writing he moves on, Upon reaching lowest part of the fortress

there's an alter on the table with, two hand prints in the middle. Un

knowingly he puts his hands in the holes. the whole fortress begains to

shake, and sounds of ancient cries and chants begain to form. After the dust

settles there is a new door behing the alter thats open. He follows the path

almost like he has ben here before. it leads to a beautiful oasis With green

trees and grass, waterfalls and cute little bunnies. Knowingly bunnies have

ben extinct for forty thousand years. he picks up a baby and puts it in his

backpack. farther down inside the oasis, there is a single mushroom, and its a

K'tari mushroom. Knowingly that they take one hunderd thousand years to

grow one, he gets excited and plucks the mushrom. On his way outof the

oasis, a Loud ROAR and pounding occour. Twlight turns around and sees a

HUGE ancient, mithical creature . it is an shaman' It starts to try and destroy

Twlight, as well as destroying this beautiful oasis and these rare bunnies.

Overcome with rage, Twlight Reflexes and manualy starts to destroy the

shaman. Twlights ripps his eyes out with his bare hands, Then removes its

powerful staff, and destroys the shaman', with his own mystical powers.

The fortress now begins to fall apart, Twlight holds his baby bunneh close

and runs almost like lighting out of the fortress. Upon arival outside the band

of regants are waiting. They see Twlight apear with the STAFF and the

bunneh. they Run to him and cheeer! The regants hoist Twlight up on their

sholders and carry him to a throne to sit on. Next to the throne is a hole,

looks like the staff will fit there. Twlight never takes the throne he only puts

the staff in the hole and watches the regans curse start to lift they are

becoming almost human again. In all of there thankful ness they ask him to

stay and lead and protect them. Twlight turns down their offer and explains,

his situation that he still needs nightshade from the desolate desert. one of

the regants aproch Twlight and bows. then he pulls a small parchment of

paper with some encantions and a map of the desert. The regant says go

precious one. This will help u on your journey. Thanking the regants Twlight

and his bunneh make haste to the desert hopeing albert is still alive. Whle

they wer crossing the wastland they encounter a large group of neocron

Guards on their way to destroy the scum as the called it a man who was

destaned to destroy them. The curption in these guards, was ovious and

they spoke of broken words. Twlight descovers that their ethic chips are

broken. Not wanting to Reviel his identy he dosent remove his armor he says

nothing and moves on. They never knew who he was. Finally after a long trip

he reaches the desolate desert. The maps shows him that the nightshade

isnt too far ahead. Somehow the bunneh knows what he wants and where it

is too. The bunneh jumps from, Twlights arms and runs ahead twards the

sunset. Twlight Runs after him as Twlight reaches over the hill that bunneh

went over there he is, eating some nightshade. and seems happy as ever.

twlight decides to rest a bit he sits down next to bunneh. And enjoys some

preachers blend vodka and some nightshade as well . While dozing off the

bunneh is startled and Stares behind Twlight, His eyes begain to glow RED

then the bunneh deleveres a lethal one hit beam from his aura and destroys a

pack of wild Grims, that were, set on destroying Twlight in his sleep. Twlight

awakens startled by the deathly sounds. he sees the dead carcace, they are

still smoking. Twlight looks at bunneh and says, " im gunna call u The Killer

Bunneh". Bunneh kind of smiles and noods in aproval of the name. Twlight

takes some grim meat and roasts it with some night shade for him and

bunneh to eat on the way home. Twlight and Bunneh make haste back to

home where albert lies desprate and weak. After running for three days

straight Twlight arives home. But he arives home to no home. There are

neocron guard bodies scatered about the area. Twlight searches franticly, for

his mentor Albert. Twlight finally descoveres his body under a pile of rubble

he is barly breathing. With his last gasps of air he says. "Twlight my son

my time here on earth is no more, I have to moveon. *gasps* rember son u

are special u are destened to great things, Never be bitter rember the things

i taught you". Twlight replys " no albert u cannot go i am not ready for the

world, i cannot carry on without you. Albert replys *gasp* " my son u ARE

ready and i will always be with you here take this ( albert hands him a set of

dogtags) these are mine i took them from my son when he died in the war

wear them and know my spirt, soul and enegry are with you, as for your tool

my son it will reveil its powers at the times its needed allow it to guide

you..... ". *GASP* *Exhail final breath*. "NOOOOO Father, Nooooo" Twlight

cries Even bunneh knows the pain that Twlight feels, he cuddles up on him

and with a kind of telapathic wave talks to him and conforts twlight. Twlight

Reads the dog tags. They read the name "Plasma Storm". In honor of his

mentor Albert, Twlight decides, he will call him self Plasma Storm. and devote

his life, to the cause that they so despertaly worked for. He will now

become a protector and helper of all runners in the world, he will remain

inpartial and love everyone the same as Albert loved him. Frightened of the

new journey aheaid , but confident of the outcome. Plasma Storm and Teh

killer bunneh walk into the sunrise. Starting their new lives togeather......



Merry X-Mas
Final Evolution

Skusty
22-12-05, 20:13
Omg! Leave some space at some places, that is impossible to read.

Dead Bodies
22-12-05, 20:28
Done- Sorry bout that got carried away should be easier to read now :D

Skusty
22-12-05, 20:47
Umm....did you pass language in school? o_O

Dead Bodies
22-12-05, 20:52
Why do u all have to be so negative its the holiday season for god sakes cant u just read the story and say cool or not anything at all even on other post people feel the need to be negative no matter what its about if i wrote a story about groming my dog u'd all have something negitave to say about it its a godam story 2 pages long No i diddnt grammer check it NO i diddnt spell check it its just a damm story use your common sense u can get the whole picture and no EnGLish is NOT my first launague so yes ill get some things fucked up sometimes .


Happy freaking holliday season!

cRazy-
22-12-05, 20:58
Umm....did you pass language in school? o_O

yeah skusty stop being lame.

and nice story well done.

Dead Bodies
22-12-05, 21:12
Id like to hear what Plasma Storm has to say about my story :D

Argent
22-12-05, 21:30
No i diddnt grammer check it NO i diddnt spell check it its just a damm story use your common sense

If you didn't even bother to do that, you can be sure that many people won't bother to read your story which is full of mistakes and nearly impossible to read because there are no paragraphs.

Happy holidays!

Skusty
22-12-05, 21:33
I was not pointing on spelling, more on how you split up the lines...not to whine or something, just to give advice how you can improve your writing. ;)

Dead Bodies
22-12-05, 22:08
im not worried about how i wrote it if u dont like it and dont want to read it then DON'T simple as that if your common sense isn't good enough to put togeather sentances and make your own paragraf if u need one to read it then don't read it its just a simple story that took 2 1/2 hours to make up what does Grammer or anything have to do with it if u cant read it then DON"T PEROID i can read it fine and the important people can read and understand it fine im not worried about you my goals wer reached

Bugs Gunny
22-12-05, 23:45
We need HELL-DEMON in this thread FAST.....

Hell-demon
22-12-05, 23:46
Dead bodies cant hold a candle to me :D


feel my ego peon!

Dead Bodies
22-12-05, 23:54
wow it took me a muintue to understand all of it then i figured out u had your own story i read it .. your one sick pupy man :) but keep it up we need more sick freaks nowdays.

Skusty
23-12-05, 01:31
Hell-demon is the queen and king of NC stories! :angel:

ZoVoS
23-12-05, 03:32
its double spaced... when typing a story ur suposed to leave it double spaced for when its printed and alterations are needed


didnt u pass english???

i cant fucking spell or type n i know that

:p

Ryen
23-12-05, 03:51
wow it took me a muintue to understand all of it then i figured out u had your own story i read it .. your one sick pupy man :) but keep it up we need more sick freaks nowdays.


Apparently zovos has a new best friend!

Hell-demon
23-12-05, 11:27
Hell-demon is the queen and king of NC stories!


King and queen?

Lets just go for hermaphrodite of NC stories

Dead Bodies
23-12-05, 17:16
Freaks hell-demon u gave me freaking nightmares last night foreal man i'ma post a new story of my dream u freaky fuck. 8|

Hell-demon
23-12-05, 17:21
what the hell are you on about you crazy bitch? 8|

Dead Bodies
23-12-05, 18:12
Nothing! i usto be maby thats the problem, maby i need drugs again to be normal....

Hell-demon
23-12-05, 20:32
tis the season to be trippin'.......

Dead Bodies
23-12-05, 22:36
Thats what the spiked eggnong is for man!

Dead Bodies
24-12-05, 17:17
It's x-mas Eve the annavarsay of the story !!!
look for a bright star in the sky in the OZS u'll find it...

Happy Hollidays Everyone!

Dead Bodies
07-11-06, 04:01
Wer'e closing in on tis season again for meh story i havent played in almost a year lets hear some NC X-mas stories Humm... Hell Demon has ben excluded from the group his stories give me nightmares. No storries from you

(Be creative use NC)









(PLEASEEE dont close meh post i knowwww its old pleaseeeee)

Dogface
07-11-06, 04:28
Where is hell-demon nowadays anyway? :(

unreal
07-11-06, 04:31
I reckon the fat stripper from Pepper Park 3 should dress up as Santa Claus, then give her 10 seconds to run away before setting loose a pack of rabid mutated dogs on her. Minced beef anyone?

Hell-demon
07-11-06, 18:19
Wheres me writing pen?


K, it is the season so I'll work something up :)

Napalm82
07-11-06, 20:21
Looking forward to it Hell-Demon, always loved your stories.

- Napalm

Dead Bodies
11-11-06, 23:35
If your going to conjure something up hell make it happy with clouds and love .... not sodomy, death and dismemberment.... And no fat black whores to sex up!

Hell-demon
11-11-06, 23:47
I thought the whole point of christmas was to get shafted o_O

solid-rock
12-11-06, 15:16
^^It is :P.

Btw Dead Bodies i cant help pointing out that the Gen in GenTank isnt an acronym just an abriviation of genetic.

Dead Bodies
18-11-06, 17:44
Theres no problem shafting someone under the friendly mistloe. or caressing the friendly spy in the back of CRP. but all the sick mutlation in your mind could be set loose by this season.... thats my only concern i know the box says +16 but we would have no pop if got rid of 10 and 13 year olds.. :rolleyes:




@solidrock- Ya know what i never realised that i did that pfft oh well no point changing it after 2 years