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Coz I got a fancy fone I can make my own screens, so anyhow I made one, after a few hours killing photoshop :o
Anyhow, without further ado
http://www.dgwebb.force9.co.uk/home.jpg
Constructive Critisisicim?
Coz I got a fancy fone I can make my own screens, so anyhow I made one, after a few hours killing photoshop :o
Anyhow, without further ado
http://www.dgwebb.force9.co.uk/home.jpg
Constructive Critisisicim?
hmm, what are the sizes and did you make the background? i dun understand which bits u did :)
hmm, what are the sizes and did you make the background? i dun understand which bits u did :)
image size is 176*200, the union jack is an image i cropped and then filled the background with the pattern before applying some filter, err notepad i think, all the rest i made, cept for the phone bits, err
http://www.dgwebb.force9.co.uk/11.jpg
so all the blue bars were added by you yes? and what about the buttons, do they need to be there.. just interested id like to have a play :)
http://www.dgwebb.force9.co.uk/rawr.psd (easier)
hundreds (a few) layers, the buttons are for easier display of the home screen text.
http://www.dgwebb.force9.co.uk/long.gif
is not one I made but is whats capable from the screen :eek:
sweet, ill have a shot... you want any style? Ill make you one if you wish ;)
click catagories / smartphone 2002/3 homescreens (http://smartphone.kleinweder.ch/downloads/index.php) for some fantastic inspiration :D
Talking of artwork Ascention, how did you make your sig? Is it all original?
appears to be the NC2 box cover - filtered, Blued out, with some Very proffessional lettering down the side - in short sexual.
Doh! :o
I thought I recognised it from somewhere...
Only the render is from the box art.. everything else is mine, the grunge/retro style background etc.. and even the render is tweaked to fit the background ;)
also the etched 'Ascention' on the gun was by meh!
Hey Ascention what software do you use?
Thanks
Ghanima :angel:
I use Adobe photoshop 7
Here lexx, hope its the right size n format:
http://farcryuniverse.com/images/home.jpg
lemmi see how it looks with all the bits on ;)
knowing how much you browse these forums I made you this one:
http://farcryuniverse.com/images/home1.jpg
just lemmi know if the icons are moveable etc :)
http://www.dgwebb.force9.co.uk/asc.jpg
Aye, all are moveable and can be any colour too and ohh that one looks pretty :D
http://www.dgwebb.force9.co.uk/asc2.jpg
/edit - the carrier thing though, I'm not on Orange, I'm T-Mobile UK (ok, I'm on Virgin, but if I tell people here I'm on a virgin they get the wrong idea :p) which is larger, so mine wouldnt actually fit :(
Okay, i made another:
http://www.farcryuniverse.com/images/home2.jpg
//edit:
this is what i was imagining!;)
http://www.farcryuniverse.com/images/home3.jpg
http://www.dgwebb.force9.co.uk/asc3.jpg
Removed the MRU bar replaced it with the Windows Media plugin (it fit so well :D) Removed clock too (its optional, red just didnt *fit*)
http://www.dgwebb.force9.co.uk/brushed.jpg
Thats what I'm using, the digital clock is in the bottom semicircle (large/bold) appointments in the square, date carrier just below the rectangle (square) and the iconbar at top, it looks sweet :D
/edit - hard to explain without a screenshot >.<
http://www.dgwebb.force9.co.uk/ss000.JPG
:D
Hokay, the one i didnt make looks the best :D
I just like the simplistic design, a couple of colours of brushed steel, nice rippling blue, but I dunno, I just want moreeeee :D
I just like the simplistic design, a couple of colours of brushed steel, nice rippling blue, but I dunno, I just want moreeeee :D
okay well i fixed the one your using, cleaned it up and also made space for the scroll bar, post your result!
http://www.farcryuniverse.com/images/fix.jpg
and silver:
http://www.farcryuniverse.com/images/fix1.jpg
http://www.dgwebb.force9.co.uk/ss001.JPG
@ Xeno - its the Orange SPV, though I wanna get the e200 because it has 2003 instead of 02 which I have, though there is a way to get 02 on my SPV its not recommended (means I can have mp3/wma ringtones instead of wav n stuff)
http://www.dgwebb.force9.co.uk/ss001.JPG
@ Xeno - its the Orange SPV, though I wanna get the e200 because it has 2003 instead of 02 which I have, though there is a way to get 02 on my SPV its not recommended (means I can have mp3/wma ringtones instead of wav n stuff)
whats with the dirty great orange thing on it? get it off! :confused:
//edit:
colour fix on the grey area:
http://www.farcryuniverse.com/images/fix2.jpg
p.s - Im not saying u should use em, just bored.. so if ya dont wanna use it then fine :)
http://www.dgwebb.force9.co.uk/Brushed_metal.jpg
my bit of rendering on the blue bit hehehe, and of course SEX :)
The Orange bit is the screenshot, I have to press * to take a screenshot which brings up Orange, I couldnt find the software that lets me control my mobile from my PC :(
/edit - if ur bored Asc...
http://www.modaco.com/screenshots/[164]Longhorn.jpg
Try that :p
/edit2 - it has the date and time twice :confused:
/edit2.5a - one I was thinking which I think would look really kewl, having a background thats fixed, like the flag thing or something, but with a filter applied to it, then all the icon bits floating using the drop shadow effect?
well first off:
http://www.farcryuniverse.com/images/fix4.jpg http://www.farcryuniverse.com/images/fix5.jpg
No about the next skin, please explain what you mean, i dont get it o_O
poorly drawn, quickly done to show example..
http://www.dgwebb.force9.co.uk/exam.jpg
All the bits where time/date etc.. go, all floating, and multi level floating too, ohh ya, floating above the other floats..
- back ground
- - - float one (date)
- - - - - float two (time)
now that sounds really like it would look fantastic
/edit - doesnt have to be the union jack btw, I just liked the effect the jack gave when filtered with the wrap filter in photoshop hehehe
okay u wanna type a list of where ya want things.. and ill do it now ;)
//edit: can i have a link to the original Union Jack image?
Ahh Ascention, nice stuff. It's good to see someone get progressively better over time. :)
Nice work too, lexx. :p
okay u wanna type a list of where ya want things.. and ill do it now ;)
//edit: can i have a link to the original Union Jack image?
http://www.foood.net/xp-flags.htm
the original flag image, use artistic licence for where things go ;)
http://www.farcryuniverse.com/images/home4.jpg
okay, now tell me what ya want.. ;)
http://www.farcryuniverse.com/images/home4.jpg
okay, now tell me what ya want.. ;)
drew barrymore naked, in my bed, calling me over? :lol: :lol:
Sleek, simplistic, futuristic, technological, well presented design? :)
drew barrymore naked, in my bed, calling me over? :lol: :lol:
Sleek, simplistic, futuristic, technological, well presented design? :)
okay i dont like this, but maybe you will:
http://www.farcryuniverse.com/images/new1.jpg http://www.farcryuniverse.com/images/new2.jpg
The signal bar is static afaik, it can only be on the right hand side of the screen, there also is no room to put the numbers for the text/email/mms (the email plugs into outlook so it can mount up with the por.. err... technical emails i get :angel: )
http://www.ruttensoft.com/smartphone/homescreendesigner.htm
thats what I use to piece the bits together :)
it does look sweet though :D
never leave enuff time to edit a post :p
http://www.dgwebb.force9.co.uk/omgwoot.jpg
what dya rekon? :D
never leave enuff time to edit a post :p
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what dya rekon? :D
Nice one! looks great ;)
Nice one! looks great ;)
http://www.dgwebb.force9.co.uk/final.jpg
The final product, cause stuff wasnt showing but now it is :D
Also uploaded it to http://www.modaco.com where people who are nuts about smartphones can go "OMG HAWT!" or something, ok, they wont, they are over 12 years old, so will appreciate the clean design :D
Okay, so i improved that version:
http://www.farcryuniverse.com/images/chrome1.gif http://www.farcryuniverse.com/images/chrome.gif
Personally this is pretty sweet, better than the other version
Trying it now, but I cant seem to get Silent to display on the phone, but damn thats sweet, can show it off to the chickz tonight when i go out on the pull :D
Trying it now, but I cant seem to get Silent to display on the phone, but damn thats sweet, can show it off to the chickz tonight when i go out on the pull :D
if you can edit that site upload then do so, if not re-submit it :)
Okay Lexx, i got carried away:
http://www.farcryuniverse.com/images/chrome3.gif http://www.farcryuniverse.com/images/chrome2.gif
what ya think?
I think its damn sweet dude :D
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