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Spermy
12-09-04, 16:50
RAWR!

So - I fired up flash to make a few toons today, I got wankers block..

So I took the easy way out and decided to do NeoMation! - A few short episodes in the world of Neocron! - Comedy.

Just trying to collect a few peeps to gimme a hand,

Need someone to write the scripts - In the style of jack the tank, If chumby's willing

Some peoples to voice

Some peoples to help meh animate.

Some peoples to Do music for teh 'mation.

Only post here with ideas and offers plz ^_^

Cheers.

EDIT - We need hosters!

Spermy
12-09-04, 17:13
1st Draft of the title thingy.

This is to start:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v298/sentientpeanut/Neomation.jpg

Then "Mation!"

Is stamped on top.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v298/sentientpeanut/NeomationStamped.jpg


Ever seen married with children? The soundclip played at the end of the title screen - sounds like a jail cell slamming? I want to use that when The stamp is placed on top... Anyone know a good soundclip to use?

Also - the style - Thinking south park-esque at the moment.

Hell-demon
12-09-04, 17:36
Voice actor here

Spermy
12-09-04, 22:28
Wow... all of ONE response.

I'll leave it open a couple of days - after that - it's going web comic.

Ascension
12-09-04, 22:29
lol could be funny..

Spermy
12-09-04, 22:31
lol could be funny..

What font is that on ur siggy? GIMME!

Ascension
12-09-04, 22:32
Here it is (http://www.1001fonts.com/font_details.html?font_id=563)

Spermy
12-09-04, 22:48
Cheers - Got the first episode/strip down now.

Called "spirit mods" - Bear with me...

So we have this tank, and the obligatory PPu

and we have a spy -

PPU is buffing the tank to hell,

Spy whacks out his SH with spirit mod...

Spy - "Eat spirit Monk Boy!"

SH dissapears with a poof - NERF! is stamped over the top of the poof.

PPu Is buffing the tank to hell, Tank whacks out a C/S - Grins.

Spy - "Shit"...

evs
12-09-04, 23:02
i r voice actor please :)

Spermy
12-09-04, 23:10
Woo! Finally some peeps wanna do stuff.

Right - I think we have all the voice talent we need - Got some RL mates to cover the rest of the voices if we need it.

What I need most is an actionscripter - Because macromedia scripting is the devil. :mad:

Need a hoster...

I got the scripts down.

EDIT - Meet the spy! :p


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v298/sentientpeanut/SPY.jpg

Tratos
12-09-04, 23:29
i can host i dont use my webspace, lol and i have a site with a reasonable URL :p

www.broken-reality.org (http://www.broken-reality.org/) :D

And if needed i can do some very good patronising boring voices for your average sarcastic spy.....:angel: or anyting you chuck at me :)

edit that spy looks mint :p

Also i can if you want build a site for them rather than just host them as im bored and have the webspace available, lol

Hell-demon
12-09-04, 23:44
EDIT - Meet the spy!

*FWAP FWAP FWAP* nice......

Spermy
12-09-04, 23:45
Cheers - doing concept sketches at the mo - Tank PA sucks to draw! I'll post a Scan of my inks when I can - prolly tommorrow morning...

Anyone else who wants to make sketches after that knows what kinda style it's gonna be in. Feel free to whack some scripts or ideas for episodes/strips on this thread - COMEDY is the word, Not a KK slate - Humour is okay - take my Spirit Nerf idea as an example.

Any suggestions will possibly be used, so if you object to that - don't post. K? :)

EDIT - Definitely doing a comic and a flash series now. Flash series is called NeoMation, and the comic is called NeoFragged.

Jonax
12-09-04, 23:49
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v298/sentientpeanut/SPY.jpg

Ctrl+Alt+Del ripoff! :p

BTW, voice actor with a scouse/northern english accent here :D And I must have 25GB of bandwidth burning a hole in my e-wallet for hoster as well :)

Spermy
12-09-04, 23:54
Ctrl+Alt+Del ripoff! :p

BTW, voice actor with a scouse/northern english accent here :D And I must have 25GB of bandwidth burning a hole in my e-wallet for hoster as well :)

Main inspiration!

It's probably going to be the style I'm going for.

PLEASE! :lol: NO MORE VOICE TALENTS! anyone who's offered will get a part but I need more trechnicals now. - I can't flash a whole episode and Do a strip AND hold a job/uni - or it's gonna be an episode a month and hardly ever a strip! :(

EDIT - Another submission from an RL buddy -= He reckoned Niddy should get his own strip every so often - Like Dom in megatokyo - explaining the do's and don'ts of forums in a comedic way, or maybe just have him sitting behind a desk nerfing stuff,

"Ban... Nerf.... Sticky.... OH THAT IS _SO_ a BAN!" etc

Judge
13-09-04, 00:06
lol sounds funny... especially the niddy thing.

I would offer to be a voice actor, but you already have all the ones you need, and I'm also really unreliable. So I'm quite possibly not your best choice.

Oh, and I know fuck all about flash, so I'm more of a moral and "in spirit" support kinda guy.

Dribble Joy
13-09-04, 00:09
I would offer my artistic talents, but I am shit, and know nothing of animation or flash.

WarBrain
13-09-04, 00:11
I can do all the actionscript u want.
I can host and make website too.

Clive tombstone
13-09-04, 00:54
I feel kinda stupid like a fan-boy but, Im a good artist if you need one.
I mean, I was gonna do a NC comic, too bad it never got off the ground (no-photshop nor photshop skills).

If you need anything as far as concept art, character design, or something, contact me, its a part of my major at college^^

NS_CHROME54
13-09-04, 01:59
i'm a photoshop nut, so if you need that kinda thing, i'm yer man. i also do flash once in a while too (not like it's hard or anything).

BaDDaSS
13-09-04, 02:09
Sounds fun.
Neocron2.org will host it for you :)

Genesis
13-09-04, 10:17
Even better, take in game screenshots and let them slide around if there's something you don't feel like drawing. Ugly, but very humoristic.

Very good idea, good luck.

Spermy
13-09-04, 10:22
WOO! It's Morning - I did a mock up of the tank for the comic - I'll scan it now and post it up =) - It's not inked, cos I did at like 11 at night - sleepyness and inking make awful bedfellows...

EDIT - Tank - Far from done. I HATE PA... Grrr. I'll spend the day on a few different facial exoressions for him, Do his armour up - because it looks a bit squify at the moment. But thats the kinda style I'm Going for.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v298/sentientpeanut/Tanky.jpg

Looks more like a PE to me... Gaaaawd!!! :rolleyes:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v298/sentientpeanut/Tankyfilled.jpg


Filled in - but a bit doubful of it at the mo...

Genesis
13-09-04, 10:42
In one of the episodes you really need to make someone synch bug, would be fun ^^

Spermy
13-09-04, 10:55
Have a few planned -

"Lag"

Tank and Spy running from a Doy bot.

Tank suddenly freezes

Spy "Run! What the hell is wrong with you!?"

Tank - "I'm Stuck!" - Through gritted teeth - He's stuck remember!

Flash to KK HQ (or wherever the servers are)

Random KK employee - "Holger! The hamster died!"

Holger - "Well change it then!"

Flash back to NC - Doy bot fires, and we trace the shot coming towards the tank

Tank - Aaaargh! (through clenched teeth - He's still stuck)

(White flash)

We see the tanky on the ground with hi shelmet a few feet away Comedy crosses for eyes, and a hole in his forehead...

*Aerial shot*

Spy (on his Knees shaking fists at the sky)

"Damn you's KK! Damn You's all to heeeeeeeell!"

Another one?

___________________

"SEX111!1"

Desert - We see a tank walking along

Tank - "OMG! DROMS!"

The tank singles out one drom

Tank - "EEEE! ^_^"

Walks up behind....

Tank - "SEX!!!"

Does all the hip motions

Cut to close up on droms face

Drom - :mad:

Next scene

We see a drom sat on top of a tank, his arm protruding out from underneath twitching.

Genesis
13-09-04, 10:59
Rofl!!!

Richard Slade
13-09-04, 11:04
Experienced storyteller voice here if you need it.
Sry, didn't see the thread until now

Spermy
13-09-04, 14:21
It's a bit much to be doing the comic and a flash series at the mo... Spent all morning getting the comic tank right... So NeoMation is on hold - Neofragged is still going though, so if anyone wants to help then feel free - or if you wanna give NeoMation a go - It's all yours...

:(

MkVenner
13-09-04, 14:24
i was thinking of doing a Neocron machinima, a film made in a pre-rendered game engine, like Red VS Blue.

tho it would probly take ALOT of work lol.

Dribble Joy
13-09-04, 14:27
i was thinking of doing a Neocron machinima, a film made in a pre-rendered game engine, like Red VS Blue.

tho it would probly take ALOT of work lol.
And would inevitably get raided whenever you try to film anything.

MkVenner
13-09-04, 14:42
true...

Spermy
13-09-04, 14:47
Aye - My promo for NC was totally crashed - there's some places I needed a high level fella to get, just some people saw a High level un LE'd player as a target...

Shame really.

MkVenner
13-09-04, 14:49
yup really is....i was gunna write a few scripts just for the hell of it n e way tho :p

Spermy
13-09-04, 15:57
Just finished colour testing The tank character - Lemme know how it looks - Proportions aren't right - his legs need to be chunkier, but it's not like this is the final draft of it.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v298/sentientpeanut/Colouredtanktest.jpg

Just for comparison

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v298/sentientpeanut/Tankyfilled.jpg

Remember it's as much your comic asd it is mine, so lemme know colour wise how he should look and i'll give it a whack.

hinch
13-09-04, 16:01
ponytail looks gay should have a marine short back and sides in military regulation black. :)

if you still need hosting for any finished .swf files etc just attach them to the forum if it allows them.

if not create thread and attachthem at location on my sig then link to that since i allow swf's and have enough bandwidth/storage for you needs

Jesterthegreat
13-09-04, 16:11
I would offer my artistic talents, but I am shit, and know nothing of animation or flash.


how many times you gotta be complimented or win comp's til you realise your not shit? :p


:edit: @ spermy

...

he needs hands


:p


j/k looks good

Spermy
13-09-04, 16:32
Okay... so hands... Yeah... should be easy yeah? Hands. Yeah. Hands. With fingers, that bend, and have a thumb...

ONOES Fingers too big! ERASE! Hand looks wierd... Erase! Redraw! SHIT the THUMB! NOOOOOOO!!! Try again... Wait - needs four fingers...

RAAAAAAaaaRRrrGH! Buuuuuuuurn It!!!!! :mad:

Hell-demon
13-09-04, 16:35
Okay... so hands... Yeah... should be easy yeah? Hands. Yeah. Hands. With fingers, that bend, and have a thumb...

Maybe it would be easier if he had hooks :D

Jesterthegreat
13-09-04, 16:36
Okay... so hands... Yeah... should be easy yeah? Hands. Yeah. Hands. With fingers, that bend, and have a thumb...

ONOES Fingers too big! ERASE! Hand looks wierd... Erase! Redraw! SHIT the THUMB! NOOOOOOO!!! Try again... Wait - needs four fingers...

RAAAAAAaaaRRrrGH! Buuuuuuuurn It!!!!! :mad:


slap DJ until he helps you! j/k :p

tbh i like what you have done. i agree with hinch on theponytail... not quite marine / tank like. the pa is very good.

Spermy
13-09-04, 17:09
Heres a different style - Cant go full black, or his hair may dissappear in dark scenes - like tunnels and stuff... also need to see certain effects such as lighting.

Oh yeah, spermy's on the ball!


*Dances*

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v298/sentientpeanut/Hairchangecopy.jpg

Hell-demon
13-09-04, 17:17
He looks like hes screaming because he has no hands :rolleyes:

Spermy
13-09-04, 17:24
Finding it really hard to get his hands right. Hes supposed to be leaning against a wall, with his hand out. Like this -

\_O_-
|
/\


OMG I'm so professional :cool:

EDIT - Fucking spaceyness at the start of a line isn't allowed... Pfft

hinch
13-09-04, 18:00
*cough*

Tratos
13-09-04, 18:11
Heres a different style - Cant go full black, or his hair may dissappear in dark scenes - like tunnels and stuff... also need to see certain effects such as lighting.

Oh yeah, spermy's on the ball!


*Dances*

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v298/sentientpeanut/Hairchangecopy.jpg
looks kick ass dude, wish i knew flash as i would have helped with that side of things.


/me goes to look at flash
/flash scares Tratos
/me runs away

lol

actualy i might have a look into it as im bored anyway.

Spermy
13-09-04, 19:10
Can someone post or attach some pics of:

A drom
A Monk in PA
A spy in PA

A Genrep ( Pink hair!!! ^_^)

A copbot.

KTHX!

plague
13-09-04, 19:25
*cough*

ROLFMAO....1!!! funny, expression on his face matches exactly too :lol:

Spermy
13-09-04, 20:31
HE HAS HANDS! ^_^

I can start putting him in the strip now, This one isn't in - it's a reference picture, I need a Drom or a PPU pic to start making any strips - can't track any down - so get those screenies posted!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v298/sentientpeanut/HANDS.jpg

Clive tombstone
13-09-04, 21:00
I have some characters designs Ill post soon (I title them, "The NC comic of the future, and by future, I mean when i get my lazy ass off to do them "comic" :D )

If you dont mind me doing a comic as well.

PS: tank kicks ass, I cant draw the tank PA that well yet :p
I can do a funny Monk PA (looks a little like BM from 8bit theater :D ) Ill post em later.

Spermy
13-09-04, 21:03
Why would I mind dude? :D

TBH - I'm surprised theres no NC comics out there already

Sexy PE! Will look better when it's done (TM!) I mean the tank is looking okay...

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v298/sentientpeanut/pe.jpg

Opar
14-09-04, 08:46
Very nice so far, keep it up ^^

Ascension
14-09-04, 09:30
ive made a spy PA but my scanner bust.. ill try and take a camera snap see how it turns out ;)